It was pretty good
One thing you should work on though is a story. Try to think up a story.
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2 cartoons in this flash were off newgrounds because of low marks......You know who you are.
ok
VERY random, but it was alright though.
hey !
I like the first part ! It's look like an i-pod publicity !
OMG! OMG! OMG!
Here it comes baby you know you wanne... I give this a:
(dum dum duuuum) B R O C C O L I ! ! !
yeah!
Cool, I sense a series.
You, that was tight. If it were longer that woulda' made front page to me. How do you feel about doing a collab? With this, you could help get us through!