Nice!

You say your 13 and you just got flash a few days ago? If so, respect. This flash is better than any of the ones I did back then, you sure have some talent. Either that or you have much more patience than I did. Congrats on your first submission too! It's good stuff, keep it up!

-cd-

Needs some effort with detail

Well not a bad start but could use some detail and more effort in the detail portions like on the peoples faces, aslo you should really try and compress this as much as possible that would help greatly, other then that it was ok.

~X~

Not bad for a starter...

If you are thirteen I give you major credit on making flash. If your not and you are only saying you are thirteen so we don't make fun of you... get a life. I'll review this with the belief that you are thirteen. I never got into flash art. I was lazy. This wasn't too bad. I didn't know if there was a plot or if you were just introducing us to your production team. To be truthful, I think you should have held off the sending in of this flash for a few weeks. It would have been better if you made more frames and possibly more movement for the characters. I think you should keep going with your flash making days. Everyone has to start somewhere. And you can only get better with practice.
Oh, and to YetiMassacre... I've never met anyone who finshed themselves up faster then you. Maybe you should wait until you are a bit stiff. Believe me, it helps.

ate my penor...

well from the beginning I new the relationshit with it would never work. it was just too disfunctional and we were always fighting over small things like who had a bigger nipple when beaming. I always knew I did but...anyway.. I got bored in the middle of it and the song was annoying so I decided to shut the sound off and beat off for a little bit and as luck would have it as soon I finished beating off your dumpy ass movie was complete. peace

Good song

Bad video,lol