ok
not too bad and good sketches, but could've been a bit longer overall.
Author Comments
This is the fourth version of this particular PSA. We redid it so many times because Calvin couldn't do the voice of RIP SKIN anymore so we made RIP into an actor who plays RIP SKIN so Calvin can use a different voice.
Oneity-EightThree responds:
Yeah well it's a PSA (Public Service Announcement) so it was meant to be kinda short
Not to bad!
Try to animate the legs,subtitles would be very nice!
And try not to make you`re jokes to much of a cliche!
It would be a much better flash!
I like you`re style!
Oneity-EightThree responds:
Cool, I didn't know abstinene jokes were a cliche but thanks for the heads up. The legs aren't meant to be animated because it's a character based from a toon my sister did called RIP SKIN and she took the lazy route so I just followed suit.
oi
I loved it...
Seriously. It got my five.
Oneity-EightThree responds:
Thank you very much.
I thought it was really funny.
But that last "Christian" bit I coulda lived without. I'm Christian myself and don't believe in that abstinence bull. Anyway, just for the record, you got a 5 from me and also, Keep 'em coming.
Oneity-EightThree responds:
I'm sorry about the religous thing, I'm not one to judge on religion and such but it seemed like a funny line so I had to.
funny
i thought that was really funny exspecially the saying at the end. i voted 5!
Oneity-EightThree responds:
I wrote it in 5 minutes so I'm glad it has a nice turnout.