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Life of James (beginning)

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please leave me you thoughts as i am relatively new to flash and so reviews are very helpful.

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((( OK )))

This was ok, i like how well detailed the backgrounds are in this, and the main character looks pretty cool. The animations are nice, and you have some good shading in this. The music is ok, but loops a lot, so maybe next time you could fix it so it does not loop, and get a better play button, because that one did have an error in it, but its still good so far...

~X~

Add a story..

..and make it longer. But good music choice, I love that song. Work on graphics and story a bit more and you'll become a pro in no time(5 months??).

well, it didn't say anything at all

it proved nothing! i mean, if you make a movie, you sorta need a plot. if not a plot, you need to grab peoples attention. you need to make it longer. a LOT longer.

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maybe its jsut me but i cant see anything, all i see is the loading sign and the song starts to play after i click play

pretty good... :)

some nice animation and good music, i encountered a bug the first time i tried to watch it tho.

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2,158
Votes
12
Score
2.71 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 12, 2005
10:09 AM EDT