Needs work

I really don't want to make you feel bad because you're probably just a very beginner with this thing us animators call "Flash". However, you really should try to re-learn the basics of animation techniques. For one, those characters should have been rendered much more smoothly, or drawn more smoothly. Bad audio, and also bad integration of real life with characters. Overall, this movie sucks. I'm sorry, but it does. I'm new to this Newgrounds business (I work as a professional animator) and I was lurking around, and this movie caught my eye. I took a look, and wow. Bad first impression.

-Steve Forman
Supervising Editor of Post-Visual Animation
Pixar, Inc.

response

>>WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU? 1st of all i didnt steal anything as I did all the camera work animation,and editing...I used 3d which wasnt stoled as it wrote Im a 3d artist and not a 2d..im just starting 2d so all the 3d is mine and all the 2d is mine as you can see it doesnt move s good wtf is up with you dont wrie crap if you DONT KNOW CRAP.<<

Yeah sure. 3d that looks like crap eh? "I beat the game!" oooooh. hey Paolo, if you're a "3D artist", why dont you take some time and submit something decent? Decent enough for me to give you a 2+ (The full score is 10 if you havnt noticed) Who doesnt know crap? you dont know crap. Take a look at your movie- than at someone elses. Dont bother comparing with other sucky shit fucks like you, but compare with someone decent. Its about time you took in the critiques and started IMPROVING your work by the least bit.

not bad

dosnt look bad! i really liked the style you used with "moviemation" heh, catchy name you made up...well cant wait to see the real movie (if you decide to make one ) go for it!
but work on your 2d animation next

This Sucked

This just sucked...its definatly worse then all those other "bad" ones on newgrounds...and didnt you learn anything at SMIS about plagerism yet? i mean your gona be a 9th grader after summer and if you plagerise in school you know your in for it

One of those things you wish you had never seen.

I am usually mildly generous when looking at movies and then reviewing them.... but this was just terrible.

Animation:
Very lacking in the animation department. It was a mix of movie clips that looked like they were made by a 10 year old, and bad motion tweens of cartoon characters and other things.

Graphics:
Again, it looks like it was drawn by a 10 years old boy. I saw a few graphics that were obviously "borrowed" from outside sources, so not much else to say here.

Sound:
Meh. The sound was decent quality, but when paired with the animations, made you wonder why this choice of music was used since it was just sort of there, and not really tied to any of the animation. When there was talking, it was hard to hear. X_x

Violence, Interactivity, Humor: Nil.

Overall:
You didn't seem to put a whole lot of effort into doing much more than cutting and pasting. You didn't actually animate anything of your own, unless you call making a motion tween animating.

On a side note, the year 2006 would be MMVI, not IIOOVI.