Umm... lets see.

Dunno what to say bout this, got some graphics and sound is clear, little humor with the whole way it is, dunno if it will get you front page man but make him look less like a manniquin with a rapid moving mouth, fix the eyes and go for some movement/action perhaps but don't matter and yeah, you could grab the frontpage goodness someday.

Overall man I give ya a nice 7.

Erm

....When the guys talking, fix the eye blink, and the mouth. IT looks stupid, try putting more effort into facial expressions. And i have to agree, a pickle dance is just stupid good try anyway.

horrible...

the beginning was a cheap twilight zone imitation. was this supposed to make people laugh? this was horrible.

Blech...

That left a nasty taste in my mouth... anyone got a glass of water or something?

what you have to do to get front page?....

write a decent flash, that's what...