well is beautiful

you made this animation,but why you don't colour it?

good

this is pretty good, your camera angles are great and it's quite detailed, since its a basic animatic i dun fnk sound / color counts at this stage

pff

seriously boring! no color... no sound... you could seriously work alot more on this.. but its an ok start..

not bad

There's definatly some promise in this, should you actually make a flash, but like others have stated, color and sounds are a must. no text either, would be good. but hey anything spider-man related is good in my book. look forward to it

tests*

thats good im just disapointed every1 has to submit a preview...
i guess you are going to add more scenes of course and, dramatic music, and color.