Sometimes the voice doesn't sync ''perfectly' The script seems REALLY, REALLY similar to ... Maybe only a hundred movies and games ever. The Flash could be really better, but its good. Good music too, so i will give you the benefit of me being a good guy. 4\5.

hmm

i only like the hellsing song.

Nope

Lookslike This thing has made by 'PAINT'. Even I can do Better if I want.
You'll need MUCH better graphicks, voices (I didn't hear almost anything except crackle).

Uh huh...

This reminds me of a cross between
Devil May Cry 2
Metal Gear Solid: Twin Snakes
and Full Metal Alchemist, in a way.
The animation is ok, but the story seems kind of seriotypical, and was just outright weird at the end... Is' arite.

This is interesting...

I found it entertaining, the characters have some charm, the story promises a lot, i'll be waiting for Episode 2.

The only problem is your Graphic skill, but that will evolve eventually. At least it isn't a stick movie...