((( NEEDS MORE )))

Notbad i like the story most of it anyways, but you could work on a few things to improve on this, more detail for one, lowering the download size, some sound/FX which would really improve on it, and more effects like violence scenes and such, nice idea though...

~X~

I agree with the last reviewer.

You do need at least a little sound to keep things running smoothly, but the drawings were good.

Also, I think this deserves a bit higher than the Mild Violence tag and if you take a few moments to fix your spelling errors, it'll make your flash just look that much better.

it was okay

animation and drawing were okay, but u NEED sound to catch an audience. its boring to just sit there and watch subtitles.

HOW THE H*LL IS THIS APPROPRIATE FOR CHILDREN

HONESTLY. its filled with so much blood. like crazy ammounts of killing and blood.

Haven't this film been up here once before?

Haven't this film been up here once before?
But you should increase the framerate and put in some sounds, i hate movies without sounds, atleast some background music...