cool

kinda wierd but cool I mean why does the hill have to be so tall and I dont get the double suicide...

nice

i really liked this its a lilium parody that doesnt make fun of the original at least to me it isnt offending nice story really brings out the love for their brother and father i give you 9 stars becuz im not really into the making parodys of lilium cuz wat emi did was astonishing and people shood really apreciate that

Funny!

Funny but you need to work on your skills!

awsome

dude, this was beautiful all of your work is, keep it up

hehe

Good job,nice ryming and thats a messed up take on jack and jill lol was funny tho