My second animation. Defintly better then my last >< Comments and Critiques welcome.
Though this is just a small preview of the current chapter im working on for my webcomic. I felt that the level of animation is decent, plus the joke is good too ^^ Therefore, posty posty.
Liked
The drawing in this was awesome and the way it made all dark was an awesome touch, it gave it a nice mysterious sort of feel to it. The talking was nice and it helped to give the story which was interesting.
~Needs~
Make it longer
More animation
A long plot
~ DeIvL666 ~
(title in work)
Yeah, the joke was good, though it's been used before in different contexts, so it really wasn't that original in my eyes. Speaking of eyes, wow did these guys have some freaky looking eyes. It was really distracting, and I think you should try and tone them down a bit in the future. The long drawn out intro was kind of misplaced I feel. Should have definitely shortened that up a bit.
One question
Was that one guy's act of stupidity absolutly necesary? i mean, god, who does not know wut D&D is?
okay....
proundly presents... motion tweened text readings. yey! The music was good at least. The voice acting was really good, and you animated the characters well. The only problem I saw was that the intro was way longer than the actual movie part... Intros should be shorter than movie segments. :P
Interesting
God I hate those stupid idiots that think they are so cool by trying to come up with funny ways to show their hate. The least they could do is spell everything right. I mean come on doomed56, reached isn't spelled reched, plaza isn't spelled pleza, residence isn't spelled residens, hello isn't spelled heloe, had isn't spelled hade, and graphics isn't spelled grafics. By the way, pretty good, but remember trailers aren't taken too well around here. I have nothing against them, but most others do.