interesting

This is very original. It's like reading a children's story.. but everything is animated and there's rob zombie music in the background... the rob zombie music isn't really of quality.. but the poem was good.

good one

very nice poem, the animation was a bit random, but i liked this one overall.

Very nice, but...

well, first off, I really liked the poem. Its hard tofind good poetry like that today. I also like the concept, but what sorta almost ruind=ed the poem fo rme was the animation, you can do better, I know you can, you have the ability, but you need to use, this would surely be front page material if you improved your graphics and stated the poem not just trough text, but through speaking. and if you can't voice act and you can't find someone else, then still do it with text, just display it differently. Good job, keep working and you'll be doing great in no time.

10-10-10-10-10-10-10

this film has changed my life, i will not become a greater person because i have watched this film. It oozes with quality and greatness.

please, share in my joy and partake in this wonderful film

Not bad

Those were some clumsy guys...demon looked more like a dragon, but who am I to judge? Oh wait, I am the reviewer, yeah the demon/dragon thing was fine I guess, but it's open for debate.