((( LOOPS )))
Ok this was ok, i liked the "ART" like the design of the trees and all, but the flash was "LOOPING" and didnt have much i didnt see any button incase that was just some prelade but from what i did see the artwork was great...
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just wanted to see what people will say. I'm figuring they'll be harsh. no but for reals i wanted some advice as in if the color for the whole scence is right and the style. if not any helpful advice would be nice, since i am a newb to all this still.
A good effort...
Good animation, good music, nicely executed, but alas... It falls flat. It seemed like an opening to me. Sorry.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! trees!!! aaaaaaaaaah!
mmmmm sugar trees.
mmmmm spice trees.
not bad...want s to see what will follow
good harmony between movement and music.lack a little diversity in image. If you can make sure the next time we can see sugar and spice , your on the way to show real talent.
It would make a really good intro.
But make an actual flash next time,this would be a really good intro for one,i hope you decide to do that cause by the looks of it you got really good flash skills,good luck.
edelion responds:
Thanks so much. i know it suppose to be the intro like an anime TV show INTRO..lol there was suppose to be 2 shadows (sugar and spice) but stupid shape hints. thanks again
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