well, this practically uses very solid sound effects, and also needed some other background music as an accompaniment!!!

Sound effects were solid but needed better BG soundtrack

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^^Good Points^^
Decent use of sound effects from the television show. You used them pretty well throughout, though they didn't sound very natural. Needs some background music to cover up the beginnings and end.

^^Needs Improving^^
Predictable to say the least. Not very creative in the way Tweety was killed. Not as good as the other cartoon you made.

excelent!

finally Sylvester got to eat tweety, but my only complaint is that tweety could have been made into a sandwich before being eaten. but other than that it was excelent! keep up the good work.

I thought I saw a good flash film I did!! I did!

Very good! I liked it. I think your a good artist. Very good and a good animator. I think you should make a longer one now.