Tasty

definitely among the tastiest of all epic ass flash

Beginning was good, but then...

Oh c'mon, you really ruined it you know. I really thought that this flash was gonna be nice, but then that milton guy came in. Then it really became a crappy movie. I really think you should improve on a lot of things.

First of all, the music kept starting over and over again. It was getting a bit annoying. Just use one song that keeps playing on. Second, the trees, the grass and the sky were pretty well drawn. The rest looked very bad. I have a feeling that somebody else made that background for you. That milton guy looked very stupid with that horsebody and with that mudpool as a head. I know you did that on purpose, but this was in a negative way. It would be better if you just draw a real human. Third, it doesn't have a good ending. It doesn't have any ending at all. I thought, now there is gonna be a good joke at the end, but it was just "he burned himself, End". I don't think that was funny. Fourth, you should add some sounds. Some sounds for when he hits that tree for example.

Overall I'd give it 4 out of 10, 2 out of 5. Many have probably said this, the beginning was pretty good, but when that Milton guy came in, the movie was ruined. I just presume that you made the background yourself. Now, if you can draw as good as that, then making a good movie wouldn't be that hard I think. You only need a good idea for a good story then, cause you can get all the sounds and music from the internet. I know that this is just your first submission so I hope you'll learn from this and make a pretty darn good movie next time. Anyway, I'll just keep an eye out for your next movie to see if you got any better. Good luck with any future flashes and all that.

~Auz

lol.

that wasnt as bad as i expected. it was funny, like "drules" and when he caught on fire all at once. lol, it did need better animation though and the music double-looped at the school scene.