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you know the basics of flash animation and that 's good, but next time in your flash animations you should use more movement in your characters without relying too much on dialogue, other than that, good use of colors and music
Author Comments
As I said... it's my first shot at making a Flash movie... Um I don't know if it's going to be all that good... I think it's not half bad though.
I would like however, for my next flash some voice actors because I don't have a good working mic.
(E-mail Martin@AZFacility.com)
Ummm... Vote...gimmy suggestions... continue living!
P.S. Thanks Xenogenocide... I used your song??? And... ya!!!
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I've read your comments and I've taken your comments into consideration. I'll elaborate on this flash and actually add some animation...and some length.
More effort...
I can see you put a lot of effort into the 'one' picture you drew...an I know you've heard this a hundred times before, but I gotta say it...I feel its my duty as a part-time (part-crappy ;) ) animator...but....thats the whole point of an animation....IT IS ANIMATED. Well done at getting through the portal though lol. Good luck with your next flash!
too much talk not enough action
so this is how cops solve a situation normally. waste of time and good taxmoney. the way you ended the situation was a lot smarter. and besides that.. one criminal less to worry about! im dead serious when i say that cops all over the world should shoot more often.. dont care if its lethal or not.
i would do the same! i play swat 3 and swat 4 and i dont conserve my ammo! i conserve my breath! :P why waste time talking to a maniac who has a gun? just blow the bastard to oblivion! :D:D:D
ur movie made a point :P
HackingTime responds:
I love the SWAT games...Although I'm rather... heh mean. I use the tazer and make them feel pain... -shrugs- whatever works eh?
exactly!
That is exactly what i would have done its ok for the story but nothing happens make another with movement...
HackingTime responds:
I'm working on it.
Weird...
wtf was that at the end why did they all fall down? wtf lol i probley wasnt paying attention well enough.
HackingTime responds:
A 9!?!? Wow... generous lol. They all jumped down because that guy in the corner ( same guy on title screen ) got fed up and shot the criminal which wasn't ordered. They all thought he fired at them so they took cover.
