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This is my first project that I have actaully not given up on near the end, so some parts are a bit sloppy. It's also my first web-submission.

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Quite good for a first try, I must say!

The graphics weren't too good (however, the bullet dust looked good) and the lack of plot really weighs it down. If you want a good-scoring movie, you should really try to add some plot to it, and not just some random fights with a ninja.

I have seen many other movies just like this (no plot, only fighting), and they aren't much better or worse.

But good job for a first try.

It wasnt bad

Good for a first start, you probly should have zoomed in on the guy when the bullet time hit because you can barley see the bullets normally, good work thu. Keep at it and you can be pro in no time.

It's good...

But here's a few things...
Characters, their horrible...
Weapons...Awesome
Sound...great
And one huge tip, when you're doing the bullet time effect, thinggy, don't start the bullet time, almost as soon as the gun fires, do it when the bullet is about 1/3 of the way there, then slow it down a little, 2/3 of the way there, super slow, start heart beat, and when it's almost there, full speed and make a lot of after effects (rubble fly, people rapidly fly off to the side, blood, whatever).

Well...

Good news - Great detail in the weapons, bullets, etc. Liked the sounds playing in sterio (hearing shots from the left on my left side)

Bad news - Pretty overused idea. Really short. Ugly characters

To sum it up - It's hard to grade this because some parts were pretty horrible and others were awesome; such as the graphics, great weapon detail, horrible character detail. I enjoyed this flash though, so I'll give it a 3/5.

Uh nice effects

Hmm the characters are just one step above sticks wait maybe not they were crappy. Second off the rest was ok.
Finally off gooenta jerrb on first submission.

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Votes
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Score
3.47 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 7, 2005
6:58 PM EDT