((( HEH )))

Ok well i think i reviewed the other one, but this just seemed like a waste, i mean it was like one scenes then the rest was text, i think the viewer wants to see something more then just one scene, anyways it was good artwork which did apeal to me so i liked it...

~X~

Don't rush things like this

Okay, first off, don't import jpeg or gif images into flash, it's better to draw on your own in the program, otherwise the image will get pixelated and take away the effect of your movie.

For a first movie, while I'd like to say at least it's not a stick movie, there's not much in terms of actuall animation, it's just some text popping up (which doesn't align properlly btw) and a man's hair flowing.

Rather than just mesh together a poor first time movie and submit it to newgrounds, you should take the time to actually learn flash first. Make the movie before the trailer, as that's what all movie makers do, they just don't shoot a few shots of an actor doing something then throw over some music and call it a trailer.

And, well, I didn't like the music, but that's just cause it's not my cup of tea.

too short even for a trailer

Not only too short , the music wasnt appropiete for a violent movie trailer.

this was nice....

...but i want to see the entire movie. make it soon

Good Art, Bad Flash

You need to work on your falsh work a bit more, tip 1, the music, goto porperties tab on your movie and change from event to stream. And this will stop the whole song playing and make us wait another 300kb for it to load!
Animation was good, more tweens needed liek you said. But please, use flash to your advantage on bringing up the text. And prehaps add some sound effects when the words come on.
Otherwise, good art and i await the full movie.