cool
short, but it was a good one. i liked the drawings and the style of the drawings in this one.
Author Comments
Well here's my first submission. i did it all free hand, frame by frame to give it that continuous movement look, so dont think i just zipped through it, altite, cus i spent time on this. graphics arent great i know. anyways, hope you enjoy it.
Good
I thought it was funny. Where is the ending though i hope to see the ending soon!
Ahh
I thought it was pretty good. I personally haven't seen something quite like it before. I gave it a 4, would have been a 5 but there was no ending.
Ok though...
Great effort on 1st flash, but there's room for improvement. The animation is cut off all of a sudden without the ending introduction. Try using more ideas on the flash. Nice try though. Cheers!
good
its prety good keep up the good work but make the next ones longer