not bad at all...
I liked it but the music didn't fit in my opinion. some more "relaxing" music would have been great.
however, keep it up. you have talent.
I particularly enjoy those submissions of yours that always end with some sort of little piece of advice, whether realistic, or not. I fully enjoyed this, keep up the good work.
that was amazing all your work is awesome and your drawings are great you rock!!
It allmost made me cry.
I love it, love your style, love the little monster xD
Nice story man.