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Overall, I enjoyed it. But what was the story about? The old man saving the boy?
Author Comments
This got better reviews than i thot so thanks for writing. this story was taken from the broadway play pillowman(it says
on loading page but some missed it). i'll work on my drawing skills more for sure, but i dont think ill submit any bloody, gorey stuff that some of you like so much, and i probably wont use my own writing cuz it usually sucks. anyway thanx for watching
Olisdragon responds:
yeah. in the play its also sort of unclear.. but yes he saved the boy
it was a good story.....
but, animation-wise, not so good. the walking of the boy was kinda off, ya'know? oh well, nice job.
((( INTERESTING )))
Its a good, and interesting story but your animation needs more detail maybe more shadow effects and detail, its not bad or anything its actually pretty good but if you put some more effort into it it would have been much better, but its a good effort so far...
~X~
Dont you have to cite this...
I believe that when you take an idea from the "Pillowman," you should at least say its taken...But otherwise, it was pretty good, nice animation and you followed the story well.
Olisdragon responds:
i feel the same way. Thats why when i took an idea from the pillowman i cited it.
check the loading page..
Yeah. . . Boring.
The style of the graphics weren't my taste and it was just too boring for me to even finish the whole thing. Try using some of your own shading style when coloring the background instead of just filling it with boring linear colors.
Olisdragon responds:
u didn't finish it...