Welcome to the Club

It's offical my buddy released his first movie.

K I am gonna be dead real with you on this review:

You're Story was actually very oringinal and I like that but I could barely hear you. There was nothing wrong with the animation and the backgrounds was very solid. The main thing that could have been fixed was the voice over department. You'll have to speak into the microphone a lot better in order for the viewers to understand what's going on.

I am so happy that my charecter was there.
Next time though make sure you have your voices in order and make sure you have beta testers.

I commend you for doing your best. You will definetly get better. SO keep your head up high.

7/10

Yea,..

You've got talent but you need to work on something with a better plot and story. Here are the problems with this flash.
1.Horriable Plot and Story.
2.Way To Short.
3.Boring
4.Could'nt hear ANY of the voice overs sounded like a bunch of mubmbling learn to speak clearer.
5.WHY did you put a 50 cent song at the end? What does that have to do with mario? Dont just stick random music that dosent match the theam!

Yea this is garbage I suggest NOT continuing this and coming up with a better sprite animation. Good Luck On Future Projects
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Over All Rating: 3.5
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THAT WAS GREAT!

No, wait, I lied. Don't bother continuing this... just leave the game sprite stuff to VGDC or Razoric.

Bad idea

I didn't like the concept.
The sprites were off sometimes.
And for some reason it was choppy as hell.

Fix the sound and get rid of all the text.

You made a smart decision, however, when you made the movie size smaller. This made the sprites appear in beautiful resolution. Heh, did I just use the word 'beautiful' to describe sprites? I need to get out more. Bottom line: FIX THE SOUND.