Ok, this movie is a little weird, its the first thing ive sent into newgrounds.
****Story*****
Basically, there is a boy who has no way of expressing himself and expressing his thoughts but when he finally does find a way to express himself, the person he tells doesnt really care, and he is crushed.
******IMPORTANT*******
I know this movie is really weird, i made it just after watching Donnie Darko so don't rate it on the outcome of the movie, rate it on the meaning that it has. and i know, the animation and drawings in the last scene kindof sucked.
((( NEEDS MORE )))
Hmmm, it was ok, but could be greatly improved with much more, like some "COLOR" and "BACKROUNDS" I know you probably wanted to do the black and white theme, but just abit of color like with the "PAPER" he handed the other guy, also the flash could be longer with more "CONTENT" its decent but needs more...
~X~
pretty good
i guess the best thing here was how your character turned out. looked pretty good, therefore, it saved the movie. (although the way you made the characters "walk" sort of ruined this).
And as for the concept.. Its hard to make out the whole point of this film.. i suppose it was the thoughts on his paper... but you didnt leave them there long enough as for to decipher the small print. i think the movie could go further after the friend drops the paper.. or i dont know.. end with drips of blood on the floor or something like that..
good first try.
Well the point of the movie wasnt the thoughts on his paper, it was the fact that he's pouring his heart out and telling a person his deepest thoughts and they dont appreciate it and they just throw the paper away, but thanks anyway :)
Deep
Well...it's deep. Deep enough for me to like it. Good job.
Thank you :)
Liked it.
For your first flash it's not bad. I like it not only because of your drawings but also because it's well thought out and you can think/philosophise about what happened :)
Not bad
For a first flash I thought it was done pretty well. Deep/thoughtful movie. Music went really well with the flick. Good luck on future flash movies