Thought provoking
If you look hard you might find some philosophical meaning to this piece. I really liked it.
Author Comments
A little flash I whipped up..It isn't the best thing I've created but It's my first submission to Newgrounds!
Thanks for all the good reviews...And for all the criticism...I can work off that.
UPDATE: I tweaked a few things and the sound FX are a little better.
dundudun..
the beginning was horribly boring. but i liked the way you did some of the later things, changing the eyes to feet, mouth to boat etc., keep it up! :)
Spend more time with the lines
It was a little sketchy, and if your going o do sketchy you have to go ALL THE WAY sketchy. + need more of a story to tell, try to only use acouple colors with stuff like that and make sure the lines are strain, the brush makes it a bit blotchy, pretty good for your first atempt
eh
It was all a little half-assed. But it was nice for a first try.
I really liked the music for some odd reason, it was nice and eerie.
Decent
Kinda boring but I couldnt tell if you were being serious about those sounds.