CoOL
Pretty decent flash, somethin nice to just sit and watch, however it could have used some background music or something to help move it along. Otherwise good job.
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Here is a short, mostly frame-by-frame animation I made for my art project at school. I only had a few weeks to do it in, and its my first flash animation (longer than 10 seconds), but it turned out ok, so I thought I would submit it.
Its not totally finished, it needs more sound and stuff, but I had to hand in my project, and this was how it came out.
-edit- The story will not make sense unless you have seen the rest of my art project, but its basically a 'day in the life' of one creature.
Enjoy :)
pretty cool
like you said though, sound needs a little work. overall, it was good, and i'd like to see some more flashes/movies from you. keep at it and you could be with the pros. :)
*Wistles*
Preety good graphics there...But what is the skulls tale? All in All you did good, Nice job.
((( DARK )))
That is some pretty nice animation you have here you are a really good artist, and animator. The choice of sound was good, and good sound effects. The story is interesting, and dark and i like that kind of stuff...
~X~
some advice! :)
Besides the story not makin sense, I didnt realize I was supposed to care about the Yoshi thing until you played the sad Pyramid Song at the end. To fix that, give the character some emotion in order to make it relatable and to give what's happening on-screen some meaning and weight...
-->The audience won't identify with something that shows no personality. And suspense doesnt exist if the audience is indifferent to the outcome.
Needs sound of course. Really cool the way you colored this by hand instead of just solid paintbucket coloring. Props for trying frame animation!!!