One Strong Goose

Nice work! Graphics weren't half bad, it was a bit choppy in some sections but for the most part was well done. The sound was nice in the beginning but by about halfway through I was getting a bit sick of it :/ Had to give it a 10 on violence because...well, it's a goose with guns, and he ripped a guy's head off with his bare wings! :) Look forward to some more storyline in your next part. Just a thought on that actually, I'm new to this place but as far as storyline goes...in book writing (I know this is flash, but just bare with me here, series in most mediums are pretty similar), if you have to say 'There's no plot yet, so don't look for one. It comes later.' Editors just toss it, because if there's nothing to go on from the beginning, and you alert them to that, they don't waste their time ;) Good luck on the next one!

A valiant effort..

I think its a great start man.. the story worked, as did the choice of angles .. so its coming together..

the more flash you make, the better you will be at it..

good job.

Hmmm...

I dont no where to start but i wasnt impressed.

((( LOL )))

That was pretty funny. I like the gooses dancing and how they are drawn. You have some great background animation and fight scenes. The music is good too. I say to keep it up and bring on more of the gooses haha.

~X~

Not bad

interesting, but some of the animation could use a bit of work, like the people and stuff