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i didnt really get wat that movie/game/watever was

looks a demo for something later on.

Taking into consideration that it is an interactive movie, i suggest only allowing a skip button on the intro, i had to replay to get the stories of each character.

They sound very interesting, i hope to see a full movie of them some day, maybe a few chapters......but i am getting ahead of myself.

This submission was quite well executed and i hope people will take the time to look over at it.

I also must add, if you are going to review a submission remember this, you are showing what the movie/game is. Not merely complaints, and not everyone that watches or plays any submission is obligated to write a revioew of how much they hated it. It puts a lot of people off.

In total, this was not the greatest submission i have watched but it has the potential to spawn of into something great.

Keep its up and i hope to see something again from you soon.

Mweh, wasn't really that exciting

Mwah, wasn't really that entertaining. It isn't really crap, cause I can see there has been some effort putten into this, but it isn't really what I would call good either. I'm not really sure about what was the meaning of this was actually, was this really all about the character profiles?

Anyway, let me tell you a couple of bad things about this. First of all, the graphics. You should really improve them if you want a higher score. Second, I think this needs some better music, I didn't really liked the current backgroundmusic. But than again that's just me, others may liked the music maybe. Third, I noticed some spelling mistakes. They don't really bother me that much, but some people get pretty pissed off cause of that. Fourth, well if this was really all about the character profiles it wasn't really interesting, you should really make a game out of it.

So overall I'd give this submission 4 out of 10, 2 out of 5. I hope you'll practice a little bit more so you can submit something good here. Good luck with any future flash projects if you were planning any.

~Auz

no

that sucked sooooooo much.
heres some tips
1. SCHOOL PROJECTS DON'T BELONG ON NEWGROUNDS
2. IF YOUR GOING TO MAKE A CHARATER PROFILE MAKE A GAME OR MOVIE WITH IT SO WE KNOW WHAT THE HELL THESE CHARATERS ARE FOR.
3. MORE CHARATERS
4. MAKE IT MORE INTERACTIVE.
So there you go

nah

Its not too bad , but I Think there could be :
1.) more Chars
2.) better Graphics ,

but therest is kind of k