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This is for someones b'day if you are too lazy to make your own flash... true its not Star warz GR SE... But i try my best

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hahahahahha

you know what its not my birthday lol

my birthday is Feb 12 lol

You way out

Good movie

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It was a decent flash; needs last-minute touchups

The flash was enjoyable to watch. It was short, funny and the visuals were nice and matched well.

What I liked the most is that you kept the eyes occupied. It wasn't one of those music videos that showed the same picture for like, 5 seconds, and the viewer gets bored of it. Nor was it one of those videos where too many things are going on that make the eyes sore. There was a visual to each part of the lyrics that matched and was entertaining as well. Good job!

There were some very minor things that needed improvement. The character drawing is slightly messy. Touchup the characters so that the lines are clean. For example, the line that creates the right eye is drawn directly through the left eye.
Also, try to color in the entire shape. There were some blank spots on the eye in certain expressions that the character makes, or the mouth wasn't colored fully red, it had a sliver of peach in it as well. These are minor things that can be fixed up in the next flash movie you make, yeah?

Anyways, good job! I gave it a six because while it wasn't an "outstanding" flash, it certainly deserves a rating over 5, which I think of as the "average".
Again, good job and I hope to see more of your work in the future!

not bad

i would have given this a ten but it was short. good job on this anyway

Loved it.

This is the kind of flash I wish I could make. Awesome job.

i loved it

it was so funny! the only bit i didnt inderstand was the bits where he had his eyes closed.

btw, i not the real weird al

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3,417
Faves:
3
Votes
15
Score
3.35 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 25, 2005
1:08 PM EDT