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Requiem

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enjoy...

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I'd like to know more about the story...

I certainly liked it, but there's no way you would have thought to animate this without some big parts to the story that weren't in the animation. I'd like to know the rest of the story sometime, I'm curious.

that was excellent

dude..... AWESOME! one question though, what was with the lightsabers?

u have my 5

you have my 5 vote thats all i have to say on this matter

Mediocre Fight Man

You so got that music from King's Field.

boring... AND HERE'S WHY!

Yet another mindless fight movie. It's the same every time. No reason given why we should care about the characters. No reason given for their conflict to begin with! Fight scenes are boring if the audience doesnt care about the outcome and ESPECIALLY if we've already seen a million fight scenes in the same theatre (newgrounds). Here's a term you should learn. It's one of the most important terms in filmmaking, on any scale....
Motivation : The justification in a film for the presence of an element.
Give purposes for your characters and their conflict and THEN you'll have a shot at the audience's attention!
Also, work on pacing... many long periods of nothing kills interest like none other!

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Uploaded
May 24, 2005
7:57 PM EDT