Poetic but...

Bullets don't keep the shell after being fired

Needs work

It was ok but could use some improving, such as more animation content, aswell as some extra detail allaround including the backrounds, but its a start atleast, hope to see more soon.

It needs work

~X~

Wow....

I sometimes feel the same. heh. You write that?

touching and scary :-D

YES YES YES

its so true... if everyone just used bullets instead of words... it would be kwazaa every day!!!

dunno where that came from..

nice words

Blech

First all you did was use a repeating animation. Get some originality. If there were actual characters saying that stuff, this would be cool. But all you did was type some stuff and have a poorly drawn bullet fly by repeatedly.