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^^Good Points^^
I thought the drawings actually weren't that bad. You did some cool reflecting for shading if that makes and sense. The music was also pretty cool, and I like how you went right into the credits at the end.
^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't have a very good storyline, or really any development in storyline. Kind of short and pretty random as well. Work on putting in a storyline and this will be better.