** I Pulished the Title and the end, thanks for the reviews but I havent had time to pulish other stuff, I am working on another submition, thanks
I have been working on this entry for a week and I hope you like it. I had some trouble finding the sound and I had some serious trouble with some errors and this is what I could get done.
Hey...
I like the concept and story, very original. But the graphics could improve a little bit, But hey, who am I to judge something like this? I can't animate to save my life :(. You, my friend, have potential in animation. I wish I can say the same to myself.
shut the damn fuck up about the penis
Yoda: fuck the damn hell out of me you must.
Leia: sure.(mmmmmmmmm)
Yoda: Don't forget to swallow, biatch.
Luke: Can we do a threesome???
Yoda and Leia: Fine
Everybody: yes, ah, hunp me,yeah, LET'S HAVE FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was good
I don't recall Yoda really being that tall, doing those kind of moves. But it was okay. As he said, don't handwrite your menu, and also, practice alot. Either practice twice a week for a month, or an entire week, every hour you can of the week. And soon you'll be a flash god. Nice work, keep it up.
Well....
Get some voice actors, put some sound effects. There were alot of mistakes in your animation. Fix that up a bit. Try not to hand write your menu screens. Once I saw the opening screen I felt like closing the video. I bet nobody pressed the replay button! LOL. I can tell that you can do a better job is you work harder. PRACTICE!!!
this was a very very very bad animation!
dodgy graphics, bad start screen as well as finish screen. tidy this animation up and maybe you could send it in again, but don't put stuff as bad as this online!