somewhat slow animation, and pure waste of time!!!
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Thanks all for your helpful reviews I will work harder and practice more to deliver better stuff for you in the future.
An Idea I came up with, I hope you enjoy its shortness
If I care I shall continue it.. that all depends on what people say about it.
If I do continue then basically the story will be like what you have seen... death, killing, more action, blood, tears, and absolute mayhem
im sorry but...
that completely sucked i didnt get one thing that was going on and the subtitles are cut off.....i know you worked hard but you can do better :)
Reminds me of The SoulTaker
Good movie, but like I said, very SoulTakerish, but then again. Thats a good thing.
no way
To much religon. Not in a church dude.
That
Well, you could have done much better, you put too much work into that one window and the guy's hand, and left everything else.
What I suggest you do, is go back, fix up the animations (by adding more small details, ie. draw in bits of brick on the walls, pues for the church, more shaded colours on the characters etc.. all of these small things can make it look great! There's all kinds of tutorials on drawing artwork in flash, you should probably look at some, and also look at some exaples of good graphical artwork, and take a good look at what they did to make it look that way), if you could get a mic (and a friend to help you), then you should add in some voice acting!
And add in a bit more plot to add interest to it... for example, ending it where you did is OK, but it should end after a bit of a flash-back for the viewers, then he looks up at something, everythign fades, etc etc. This be a cult series like Hellsing was if you take this idea, run with it, and fix it up. Lots of room to improve on what can be a great idea.