it was good but nothing i would want to watch....sry......ur a good movie maker and i know u could do better.....ur other movies were great tho
keep it up!
in the words of saint nick - holy fuck its crawling up my pants!!!!!! i think what he was really trying to say was damn thats sum good animation u did. :D
all my 5 are belong to this
It's amazing what the random flash button can do.
Quite a flash you've got there and a nice taste for black and white. First, I'll make my comments:
1) Sketch style for Flash movies is rather difficult and you've done a good job there. Especially for Roy.
2) The 3D scene where there is a 90 degree angle was very stylish and achieved its point. Quite a difficult technique to learn in flash, let alone use it often.
3) The sound levels were very good. The tone of Roy was perfect and he created the whole mood for the entire Flash.
4) The only recommendation is that some areas of the flash may have been 'too sketchy' like the map of 'Deppaton' (sorry if incorrect spelling). That can also be based on personal style as well.
Overall, a well done flash and great usage of the black and white colouration. The voice worked well and the concept of the whole story pulls in the viewer wanting for more. Keep up the good work.
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much talk :/
but i dun hate ur movie...it's really good but way too much talk...so next time, make a more action and less talk...alright?
That's the plan, it's just a prologe to set up the story, the series will have more drivebys, car chaces and gun fights than you can poke a stick at.
Go on, poke away!
It miss some humor
now its just a guy talking and talking and talking