not bad
Not bad all in all a good animation apart from the spelling
Author Comments
I delete all bugs in movie. The Music and sounds have better quality. I've start make the second part! More on WWW.MADNESSCOMBAT.NET
CHARACTERS FROM THE SECOND PART:
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Grammar!
Almost every flash you make has the same thing, Grammar Mistakes!
The storyline
In New York City, police dedicate themselves to finding out everyone's names. It follows John MehMawck, a person who was denied a job as a cop due to his poor grammar skills. He meets up with Mick Flebergetskzy who assigns him the job to steal a 3rd grade grammar book with his partner Ronaldo Barrakudiase. They land in the woods from their invisible aircraft only to find that the guards have been paralyzed in their index fingers, thus they cannot shoot them. John manages to get up to the 4th floor and finds the keycard but forgets that his friend is still on floor 2. He finds Mick's friend, Louis Broadass. In the process of escaping, they are assaulted by Sean Badgersh and his guards. After telling Sean his boss' name, Ronaldo is shot. He takes the guard's SPAS 12 and forgets that he has to cock it. Instead, he took advantage of his lazy animator and used it like an auto-shotty. John is scraped by a bullet and dies. Louis escapes because Sean wouldn't shut up and kill him. A bunch of C4 pops out under John's corpse. He does not die here, as a sequel was made.
Very good
Cool flash :D "George, we have a problem!!! What??? This!!!".... :P Great.
Good Job!
Awsome Flash! - PingPongs