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i couldnt even hear it

you need to turn the flash's volume up and shit,my speakers were on max and i still couldnt barely hear it,good animation though

Blah!

Could have been much better. Might want to improve the sound a little bit, its a little hard to hear.

good potential

but stinks like the poison gas in the break room

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good graphics, sounds poor, and it isnt really a story...