A bit boring

x_x
But otherwise good.

great one

excellent 2nd part to this show. since this is only episode 1, i can only imagine how good future episode will be... and something tells me that future episodes will rock the portal.... also, congrats on winning the daily 3rd for this one too.

LEARN TO EMOTE!

What the hell was that? The voice acting was so terrible, I couldn't watch it all the way through. Not to mention, when played in FireFox, everything sound wise wasn't in sync with the animation. The subtitles were off and poorly done. Next time, try color coding with smaller text.

Getting back to the voice acting... May I suggest looking harder for voice actors. I know you're all ammatures here but ya know, when someone is being shot at, they kind of FREAK OUT! You guys sounded like you were reading from your scripts for the first time. I understand this is a flash flick but rehearsing, emoting and putting in some god damn effort doesn't hurt either!

The music was so mainstream and loud, it gave me a flipping migraine. When you have music playing, it's supposed to be QUIETER than the characters.

The fight scenes were rather corny with the fading to a lined BG. Though they were well done. Just... next time, don't use so much slow motion. It gets corny and it just looks like you're mimicking The Matrix.

Nice attempt but I would like to see this redone with better voice actors that know how to emote and have ACTUAL accents. I give this entire episode, a 4.5/10.

Motion Capture?!

How did you put motion capture into flash :O. Good two episodes but no offense but the voice acting needs to improve them black stickman sounded really dopey a couple of times and the ausie wasnt the best and the female characters where weird one sounded like a fake american and the other was like some upper class english voice it was kinda of putting but the flash was still good.

Great

How on earth did u intergrate the motion capture into flash let alone the stick figures. And if its obvious forgive me i know nothing about flash lol great job man make more of but take ur time so there all this good