Pretty cool
The room looked nice. nice characters. The first-person point-of-view stuff was cool looking. The sound affects were really generic library sounds that didn't fit the movie's mellowness. Overall, pretty nice job.
Author Comments
This was a final project for a flash class. We had to do an ad for a made up soda called "Gorge Soda" and somehow include the 4 seasons. Those were the only requirments. Mine ended up not so much as an ad then as a short story. The voices are me pitched down and time stretched same with some of the sound effects, the rest is found. This is my first submission to Newgroundsm I hope you like.
Sad. Truly Sad
Its truly sad how the world has people like this, and the dog brings out their laziness. I like the way you created the sad mood, truly touching.
koolz
it was koolz... i suck so i know i wouldnt have done better
tho i kinda feel hangin' after da endin.... mayb it just me
well... hope 2 c more flashes 4rm u =D
It could have been better
While this was a good flash, I have to say that more could have been done. It had potential to say something substantial about life.
jungledubber responds:
Thanks, I would have liked to do more. It was done in my first ever flash class. Between learning the program and meeting a deadline, i had limited time. I also kinda feel i bit off more then i could chew, but i had fun.
Good animation
nice job. the dialogue was kinda cloggy and messed up though.
jungledubber responds:
Thanks. Yea i kinda wanted the voice to be muffled, but it's too much on the verge of being clear but not clear enough if you know what i mean.