what a very good job you have done!!!
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note: This submission is 1024x768!
Made this as a submission for the wild compo on birdie, It didnt pass judgement though, but the other submissions where sooo good =)
update:
like this? save my name or something, i got more stuff comming!
Good job
GREAT MUSIC;)
Okay thanks for using my song.. it has been a while and i renamed myself to DJKiwi.. but whutever..
great work
Your DJ:P
Hey!
This is something new! I didn't get why it was so many linew in the beginning, but later on i noticed how much cooler it got. I take it was supposed to be some sort of facility, with three main structures. And a nice music which tells you that this is supposed to be good :)
You should've gotten rid of the lines after you filled it with colour, though. Still, Very good!
~ Frost
Ohls responds:
yeah I shouldnt have done those Color fill lines in the end, I was rushed though since I had to be done within 40 min hehe =)
It was submitted to the birdie wild compo =) you know, Birde as in the demo lan =) They didnt use it though =/
Interesting
All in all I enjoyed watching it. It was a bit hypnotic and I love watching things come together like that. I liked the addition of the red line here and there to add a bit of color, as I realize lots of color in the beginning parts was neither wanted nor necessary. However, I would have given a lot higher marks for graphics had there been a bit more variety at the end. I liked the finished product but...all green? I would have enjoyed it more if it had been a little more multi-colored. Maybe the inside walls showing up off white or some other color? Just a suggestion.
Ohls responds:
great tips! thanks =) I got about 50 of these laying around for no good, im compiling them right now and making one huge submission =)
