.... Sorry had to say something....

I dont think this animation was up to a standard that you even expected yourself. Im sure you have worked hard on it but there are some things that really made my cursor float over the [x] .
The sound was one of the issues, there was too much "speaking right into the mic", which caused the voices to sound too "ruffled". Some of the graphics seemed to be rushed. In some cases it makes me think that this is more or less rushed however it didn't ruin the style, which was quite original.
I hope you would be able to florish on your animation/drawing skills. And try not to rush since some of the animations that didn't even reach the top 20's took around 1-2 months to create.
That is all.

Oh My Dayz.

What a great movie. Tim, you've dun it again. Love this stuff.

weird

it was weird but i kinda liked it

ok so its completely un related

you know i've noticed something here on newgrounds, if someone reviews a submission, and its not exactly to the authors liking, they come out with reems of abusive coments, i mean please, the point of a review is to voice your OWN OPINION on whatever the movie is. so please artists out there, jus cos u got bad review, dont go shouting WANKER to everyone, listen to what the people are saying, and improve your flash cartoons in the way they say. without them, you have no audience, and thus no cartoons.

rant over. thank you, btw, bice flash, like the drawings, it would be nice to see him from different angles, and more effects such as blood or guts or somat, but other than that, great start.

Plz Fix the sound!

You animation was good, and the story was decent, but i could'nt understand half of what you were saying. From what i could tell it sounded like you were making the story up as you went along. Im not sure if you had a script or not but its an idea. Over all your flash was better than average.