this is a claymation, i spent well over 3 weeks on this, it took a lot of work, time, and effort, so please dont jsut blam it cause its clay.,.. i spent a lot of time on... everything, i knwo the walking is a skitchy..... and its not sup[posed ot be funny, its about a guy who will do anything for a girl and its still not enough....
heh... i liked it a bit
it was alright.. the graphics were really.. slow i guess and it is also fuzzy, and the men / woman moved SOOOOOOOOOOO SLOW
you definently need work on this one, better luck next time i guess..
but still, good effort that you put in
;)
LOL U SUK *BLAM*
well...
Like the previous guy said, it was a good concept. The end is far too abrupt though, and the way your characters walk is far beyond "skitchy" in my opinion. I know from experience that animating walking is tough with clay, but if you get it right, it'd be so much worth the effort.
Also, I'd look to alter the subtitles to make them look a little more professional.
Like I said, good idea and all (I am half-working on a vaguely similar clayproject myself) but it could definately do with some tweaks.
I like it though, I'll keep an eye out for you.
thank you, and yes, before i submitted it, i meant to fix the sub-titles... unfortunitly i forgot... so im gonna do that today and swap it, and about the walking, yea now that i look at it it does look worse then iremember... im gonna make a new movie with regular walking....
Nice concept, but seems far from complete...
This submission is definitely OK, and if you worked on it some more, it would
win a Daily Feature hands down. The ending seemed a little rushed; I know
claymation is hard to pull off, but cutting it short hurt your score. If you actually
intended to keep it this short, then I'm sorry for calling it rushed. Next time,
develop the characters a bit more. The story is something many guys can relate to
(myself included).
Keep at it.
thank you, i'll work on devolping characters, and length
......
pretty gay
