The laugh at the end was funny although I thought the jokes were a little overworked, mostly the scream. It also ended before a final punchline. Gotta have the final punchline.
I thought the part where the dude got punched for being a wuss was funny. The scream got really old really fast. But I thought it was decent overall. You'll get protected man. Good job.
you definitely need some fresh screaming sound effects. you really used the hell out of the one you do have.
It was ok
wasnt the best but wasnt the worst.It was average.It was funny in the begining were he hit the dude for being a wuss though.
Not too bad
Not too bad. A little short, a little twisted, but I liked it overall.
You might have wanted to do a little more drama in the room at the end. Just having a big room with a window makes the end result kindof obvious. Remember, the scariest stuff in the movies is always NOT seeing it.