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This is a story about a man who is murdered, and who then tells what happens to the man who killed him. I fixed the lagging sfx, and now the spinning object is indeed a shell casing ;) Enjoy.

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awsome

This movie really captured the emotions that could run through your head at that time. This is by far one of my favorite movies on here now. Good work man.

ahh excelent stuff

very good and meaningful with an interesting message being brought across. a good effect was when all the emotions were rushing through his mind before being shot...yeah this was good. the music went really well with it as well, but one thing i wasn't sure about was when the bullet was spinning...bullets dont spin :S

anyway excelent work. keep it up

BetaHoogar responds:

Thanx. I'm glad you watched it in detail enough to notice the bullet too. It is meant to show a shell casing, but when I actually drew one it just looked like a rectangle spinning and you couldn't tell what it was, so I just put a bullet in there.

Interesting

Nice and meaningful and all that... there were some nice effects in there, like the text that fades into red. The simple white-lines-on-black style was good. More artwork and animation in there would have been good, but I sort of see why there wasn't much. The background music worked well with this too. But there was one thing... the policeman shoots him, but he had dropped his gun earlier. That makes the plot not make much sense... but maybe I'm missing the point.

BetaHoogar responds:

If you are talking about the part I think you are talking about when you say the policeman dropped his gun, that was the murderer who dropped his gun. I tried to make that part clear with the blood on his hand and arm, but the black and white had limits and it was a short shot. Thanx for the review.

good

I have a feeling you dont like guns, while i dont mind them i share you feelings on them.....good work

BetaHoogar responds:

Personally I think guns are cool, I just have a thing about people killing other people with them.

AMAZING

VERY DEEP EMOTIONAL STUFF TRULY GIVES U A LOOK ITNOT HE MIND OF SOEM PEOPLE LOOK FORWARD TO MORE OF UR STUFF

BetaHoogar responds:

Glad you liked it. I'm making another, I guess you could call it a sequal, called Barren. Thanks for the review!

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Apr 17, 2005
4:48 PM EDT