Black like Black Chronicles should be.

Pretty good. The music was great and fit the movie perfectly. The art was very good, i liked the smoke...... but the blood was a bit crap. That really let the movie down.

great

very nice it wasnt as long as i expected but it still was good...once again great music it compliments the series well....keep it up

cool

It was very cool and darkish but you need to people to talk 5/5

Still needs some work...

I think the animation will be cool with the Noir style, but I think the music might need to be re-thought. That song gave it an interesting feel, but perhaps a more serious sounding song accompanied with voices might work better. Still looks promising though.

WTF?

First what is up with that sutpid emo crap going on? The music bits the graphics bit. I am ok with the fact that you are trying to make a mystory around your character. In fact some of the best ways to start out a seris to to not give a lot of detail in the begining. However, you will get the mormon people upset by relating thier name to violence and drugs. Be careful becuse that can hurt you. and the name of your episode and name is a rip off of the Hit TV show Cowboy bee- bop. Pleasew try to use your own imganation or you can be dinked for plagerisum.