nothing i type can do justice to that piece. congratulations, and i really hope you will make more flashes .
I'm impressed to see this was your first submission, kinda on the film noir/silent movie sort of scene. But it has something more to it. Something that makes you want more.
I was thinking there was going to be a twist ending or a punch line, but you kept it nice and atmospheric till the end.
I'll keep my eyes out for more man.
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Hey man, nice one chap. You really should finish some others, esp the one we done 2gether. Nice one J, keep up the good work.
sad story, but well done.
despite the lack of all above, i did find it a very moving animation. good work