didnt even watch
bigcoat it isnt my bedtime
Author Comments
a test animation for an upcoming series
from 4boxcomical made by me and Mark aka 4boxcomical whos under review for some dogdey jackson games so we have to put it under my name which is good cos its mostly mine anyway.
SORRY I HAD TO WAKE UP TO WRITE THIS
Come on if you claim to be good at what you do than prove it with this one here I mean the other one you have with the one assoicated with death is pretty good but this one makes wanna fall asleep.
Frogcloset responds:
yeah sorry bout the one about death (white ep1) was the mainm goal for me but i was unsure on lip synching and how the flash is chang when uploading i used the whole leader of man to perfect my use of sound in flash
Well....
Well it was just lacking something. The sound quality wasn't bad, but you could still hear some scratches in the mic. The character drawings were ok, but you still need to work on your robot drawing. The one thing you should do is make that one guys face brighter when he talks. You really need to put more into this I mean it was only talking all the way through even though some of it was funny it just isn't a kind of flash that most people want to watch.
hmm
It looked good at first, real well made and stylish, but then the voice was unclear and it didn't go anywhere, but keep up the work i like how your style is shaping up.
Not bad
It was not bad one thing that ruined it a bit for me though was the breathing down the mic while speaking couldnt work out what was being said. Also when there talking it gets very tiresome watching the same scene, should have been made more interesting with the dialogue being so long.