hmm
You would've made a better movie if you had put more effort into it. The whole movie looked just too scruffy for me. Try harder.
P.S. That bunch of weird red-eyed hares freaked me out.
This is my first flash I've made (besides some stick figures making jokes) so it's kinda short and under grade but I hope people like it.
hmm
You would've made a better movie if you had put more effort into it. The whole movie looked just too scruffy for me. Try harder.
P.S. That bunch of weird red-eyed hares freaked me out.
good, high 'huh' factor
I like the idea of drawing over the frames to achieve animation.
However, music should have been twice the bitrate, it was hard to follow or even see what was going on - and in the first part (background scrolls down) - the rabbits head (dark maroon) is not hidden fully.
But I like the style. If it made sense this would be proper kewl.
that didnt make a lick of sense
decent animation,didnt make no damn sense and it was pretty stupid,good luck next time
really good...
considering all you've previously done is make stick figure movies, this is a really good one in my opinion... the graphics werent that great - the hares looked ok, but the overall backgrounds were just too dark and a bit sketchy for me - set the mood very well though - so yeh, a 6 from me for graphics.
the animation was alright also, you just needed to clean it up and smooth it out a little bit.
overall, pretty good stuff, a lot deeper than any stick movie will ever be. good work.
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
hmm
the problem wasnt in the style, all good. the problem was it didnt really end. have the bunny call is bunny friends and go ripshit on the hunter and then youve got something.