Dude.

Dude. I've so totally been to Dr. John's. I know the guy that used to be the security guard there. A friend of mine was looking for some dirty card game, and dragged a shitload of us there.

Anyway, good flash, I want more! MORE damnit! We need more positively themed Nebraska stuff, cuz, we are the coolest. *iowa sucks, so does kansas.*

ok

not bad, a bit random though, but i liked your efforts in this one.

Original with potential

Now let's see some more.. if it's as good as what you have so far, you'll have a winner.

Well done, but it would have scored higher if you'd given more to start with.. nonetheless, it's very good and potentially really funny and well done.

Looks Great...

Just finish it, then slap it up here on newgrounds. I'd say it'd do very well.

good start but finish it before you submit it

the little bit that you have is not too bad. it didn't get much into humor at all, though it seemed you were setting it up. don't put up your stufff if it isn't finished. especiall if it is that sort.