it was koo

it was funny, i liked how she turned into a raisen.

5

People like to tan, but some just take it to far. Not to spoil it or anything, but it was a nice little turn-around at the end when you find out who the character is supposed to be. The background for the skyline was really nice in it's own way. While it is not incredibly detailed, you get get a feel for it, and it is quite eye-pleasing. The character herself was pretty simple, but that was just part of being sun-dried. :) Nice looking shadow of the chair and unbrella along with the sand castle. A good use of sound effects, like her bouncing, and for the end credits.

ok

not bad, pretty short, but funny overall.

LOL

haha, didnt see that coming,

disturbing

Graphics: the graphics werent bad for someone with there first submission! Though you could have token more time on some parts of the background though. Like drawn the waves a little bit more smother, make it look like the waves are carrying some sea foam, besides that though, this flash wasnt half bad! I ope to see more work from you, but remmber take your time! We dont need mroe crap than what we have already flowing into the portal!You seem to have real potencial!(spelled that wrong)