Well...
It could have been good with halfway decent animation. That, and having maybe ONE frame without 10 spelling or grammar errors. That basically makes it damn near unreadable.
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Go watch superbob returns if you havent seen it..before you watch this.
i lurved the music
it ruled. other parts needed work
It was ok
You didnt draw the heads, but otherwise, the drawing was acceptable, and some parts were stupidly funny.
its ok
nothing special but good.